My Special Place

My special place is the Otahuhu pools because I have been there with the family and with my Australian family. All sorts of things happen there with my family like my cousin's 1st birthday party and go there just to spend time with the family. The pools are indoor and a basketball court is outside and indoor and there is even a library connected as well.

Once you finish swimming and having fun you could go out the pools and then play some games on the grass where it looks like a field or you could go on the park. Some events happen there like the christmas party and more. The pools are great because they have a booming pool  a swimming pool a pool to play whatever you want in a spa pool and a kiddy pool and they have a water park but the water comes and goes.

I have fun memories from the Otahuhu pools and I even saw my cousin at the pools having a birthday party for his little brother or sister's party. The thing I like there is the booming area but don't boom I just jump and then swim out of the pool. The I like because it's fun for the whole family not just for kids.

I chose this place cause I have only been there with my family.

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My Special Place

My special place is the Otahuhu pools because I have been there with my Australian family. All sorts of things happened there with my family like my cousin's 1st birthday party, and to go there just to spend time with my family. The pools are indoor and a basketball court is outside and indoor and there is even a library connected as well.

Once you finish swimming and having fun you could go out the pools and then play some games on the grass where it looks like a field or you could go on the park. Some events happen there like the christmas party and more. The pools are great because they have a booming pool  a swimming pool a pool to play whatever you want in a spa pool and a kiddy pool and they have a water pbut the water comes and goes.

My Australian family came to NZ and we almost went to the Otahuhu pools everyday and to the beach. They had fun and all of our family went in the pools. Our house is near the pools so that’s cool too and we also  

I have fun memories from the Otahuhu pools and I even saw my cousin at the pools having a birthday party for his little brother or sister's party. The thing that I like there is that there is a booming pool, I don't boom I just jump and then swim out of the pool.I like it because it's fun for the whole family not just for kids.

I chose this place cause I have only been there with my family. I've also been there for birthdays and I see some of my family members and we never made a plan to meet.

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